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Silent, l Love You

Missing image
Nights wrapped light,
Never reaching the end,
Poems I've written,
Never meaning to send.

Beauty I see in your face
With my eyes lost in grace,
Just what the future is
I can't say anymore.

Silent I love you,
Yes, I love you,
I know I love you.

Watching other lovers,
Some hand in hand,
Reminding me what I hope for
Are you able to understand?

Some try to tell me
Of hope they're unable defend,
Just what God wants to be
We will know in the end,

Quiet I love you,
Yes, I love you,
I know, I love you.
I know, I love you.

Time lost in waiting,
Never reaching the end,
Poems I've written,
Never meaning to send.

Beauty I see on the inside
Such as I never seen before,
Just what the hope is
I can't say anymore.

Breathing I love you,
Yes, I love you,
I know, I love you.
I know, I love you.

Still I love you,
Yes, I love you,
I know, I love you.
I know, I love you.

Author notes

Inspired by Nights in White Satin by Moody Blues
http://www.lyricsfreak.com/m/moody+blues/nights+in+white+satin_20095762.html

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  • Jeff.W
    April 9, 2007
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    this is a beautiful poem. i love it. thanks for entering it

  • meredith spitz
    April 7, 2007
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    You expressed so much in this poem and I hope you do good in the contest. Loved it!!!!

  • alemana
    March 31, 2007

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    My favorite part
    "Watching other lovers,
    Some hand in hand,
    Reminding me what I hope for
    Are you able to understand?"
    Good write good luck in your contest.


  • Tomorrows Window
    March 31, 2007
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    amazing. I love this part:
    Watching other lovers,
    Some hand in hand,
    Reminding me what I hope for
    Are you able to understand?

    it just reminds me of my relationship with my special someone so much. Your poems is...well I'm speechless. Truthfully, it hit home. We've all been there, and this expressed that feeling so well. Thank you for sharing!


  • babydoll--x
    March 31, 2007
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    Nights wrapped light,
    Never reaching the end,
    Poems I've written,
    Never meaning to send.

    Beauty I see in your face
    With my eyes lost in grace,
    Just what the future is
    I can't say anymore.

    Silent I love you,
    Yes, I love you,
    I know I love you.

    love it,
    this is amazing

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