I'm Passed
out on
The Gurney
I'm waiting to
die
as the heroin
C | o |u|r|s|e|s
through my veins,
Making
the world
seem insane...
my life living here,
I'm taking it in vein
A blade across
the wrists,
to dance with the
Lovely lovely, stars
This my new addiction...
percocet
laced
with
lithium tears,
will this be another ((tragic))
ending?
l|i|f|e,
doesn't amuse me anymore,
it's { all about } the
bulimia and anorexia depression
that takes hold,
As I kneel crouched ...before the porcelain god
I'm not good enough...to be in this world anymore.
I need the candy cane never land,
where the girls ( are beautiful)
and they're drugged up on
morphine.
I'm too numb for this...
Scratching melancholy verses on my skin,
The blood pours out...
and glitters
against the white tub,
don't let the voice of Angel's
h i n d e r
the decision...
I'm a coked out whore...Nymphomania
isn't a disease,
laced with sex and lust
addicted to nicotine [[kisses]]
I'm playing
with FIRE |D|e|s|t|r|u|c|t|i|v|e life
ignite my fuse,
and let me purge out the pure.
I'm craving
vodka and meth
needles...and pain,
bite me and fuck me,
come on lets go
...don't let this life die...
I'm the marionette and you're the master,
pull the strings....
Author notes
Rosita.
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Whooooa thats a definate cookie cutter status poem right there. but i did like this line:
against the white tub,
don't let the voice of Angel's
h i n d e r
the decision -
Hmm.
I suppose this is kind of a description of yourself in one of your moments. Depression has one 'p', I think.
I would still like to know what 'dirty pretty' is. Much success in this contest.
Andy
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god this kicked ass. awesome job. loved the description, and all. shweeeet!
much love,
the existentialist
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Great write doll, A bit to much punctuation, but I liek that your style is slightly differnt than others, you have those short centerd lines, and its your own original style, great job doll, you are helping define what we are talking about!!!
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wowww.
trippy.
love it, babe ♥ -
wow you hace talent....this was really amazing...I could relate to this so much! I liked the style you chose....it was very effective for the piece....but what is this dirty pretty everyone is speaking of???
I'm very comfused.......again great write....
XTashaX -
baby...this is an amazing write...but a little too much random punctuation.....but other than that....sheer perfection.
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So you're telling me that you actually have a specific WAY/system for making a dirty pretty a dirty pretty?
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I think it sounds finished....and it's fabulous hunny.
::A b.l.a.d.e ac.ro.ss::
the wrists,
to ++dance++ with the
{Lovely lovely, stars}
T.h.i.s. my new addiction...
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L..it..iu..m. tears,That was by far my most favorite part, because I can relate to this in reality. Fabulously written, put together so good, and a great read. Very well done!
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Stunning!
This poem is a dramatic masterpiece!
The cries for help echoes in the darkness
like a piercing spark in the blackness of night.
The form is brilliant which adds dimension to
the drama and chaos. The message is clearly
defined. I believe everyone can identify with
some part of this brilliant write.
Captivating and intriguing!
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