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Soft Waters

Distant memories of love
In the water float
I see your wisdom through this place
My shirt falling off

Hearing the waves flow over the water
I listen and hear them flow
the lillies floating on the water
As we begin to float

Were the here
the now
let our love flow
Down a river of dreams


Now we connect in this flow
And drift down the way
Now we kiss
In a passion

We are just a mix
of love and licks
Let us fall back
and float down
Like the lilly in the water

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 5, 2007

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    EvilGrlGenius,
    This is a great write, I like the imagery you have created with your words
    Very sensual, a wonderful interpretation of the picture
    Thank you for your entry & Good luck
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda


  • KittieLyyn
    March 29, 2007

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    lovely i love this part

    Hearing the waves flow over the water
    I listen and hear them flow
    the lillies floating on the water
    As we begin to float

    Were the here
    the now
    let our love flow
    Down a river of dreams

    great job


  • Angierie
    March 29, 2007
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    Interesting.. imagery all over the place..lol.

    Great job!!

    Angie