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What Am I to You?

Am I the one who brightens your day,
when everything else is in disarray?
Am I who you enjoy making fun of,
When all I ever did was love?

Am I the one that you love back,
proving your heart isn't cold and black?
Am I the one you want to wake up to,
and have beside you when everything's blue?

Am I the only one to hurt you,
then come back to start anew?
Am I the one you tell your fears,
and holds you close till everything clears?

I don't deserve another chance,
but please for me, give it just one glance.
All I am going to ask you to do,
is to answer "What am I to you?"

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Broken Hearted. Upset. Bad Day. For Him.

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  • sexycowboy
    April 7, 2007

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    Wow

    Its great and i am one that always takes that girl back becuse i love her more than she could ever hurt me great work keep it up


  • Kevan
    March 29, 2007

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    Excellent. I like your rhymes mostly... except for the last one where you rhymed you with you but thats alright. I still like it and you proved your point. I only have three more words for you...


    DO IT

    NOW
    lol, great job
    ~Kevan~


    • brittie
      March 29, 2007
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      I can't really do it when he isn't here now can I??? And I fixed my little mistake.. What happened was I accidently clicked on these damn adds and it switched my page so when I went back.. POOF no more poem. Besides the cursing I did.. I had to re-write it and wasn't paying attention so much..