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stuck

cant find a way out
of this pain that i hold
it brings me down
it locks me up
cant seem to escape
my only fate
i cant celebrate
for my heart is full of pain
cant look the other way
cant turn around
im so lost
i might drownd
cant seem to find
all the reasons why
this depression choose me
to rule to chew on
i just want out
i just need help
for i cant do this alone
i cant do this by myself
so find me if you can
save me from what hides within
help me find my way out
to make it through this life im living
your my only chance
to escape what i cant
to get me through this darkness
to let some light in

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  • serenity silvermoon
    April 4, 2007
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    this was great poem sad but good you are a great poet thanks for sharing and God Bless