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The Brothers Creed

So close, yet so far;
even as we tough there is a vast emptiness
between us.
The sun shines and we,
the forsaken ones,
cannot feel its warm rays.
Forgive me my transgressions,
my faults,
my promises unfulfilled.
Forgive me everything;
don't hate me, please,
I beg.
One day, things will be right:
we will once again be in
God's good grace and
feel the sun's warm light.
'Live together, suffer together,
die together':
that is the brothers creed.

Watched FMA and decided to write this for the Elric brothers.

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