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i used to breathe

i used to breathe
your air your life
but you threw me out
you put up a fight
i used to see all the hurt all the pain
but you put it up
you hid it from me
i used to try and help you cope
but all you wanted was to be alone
now your bleeding
lying on the floor
screaming out my name
but no one comes
i dont return
you gave up on me
so i gave up on you
i didnt want to
but you forced me to
so this is something that i give
a little clue alittle hint
stop the blood from within
patch it up with the love you hide
let it out all your pain
i love you
please don't die

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  • Nadala
    March 30, 2007
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    Great work I really loved that ending, good luck in the contest