She was a dancer
She was a singer
She was a writter
She was a raingirl
She was human
She was a freegirl
She was a fungirl
She was playful
She was sunshine
She was human
Now she's a cutter
Now she does drugs
Now she's a smoker
Now she does pills
She's dieing
Now she's a goth
Now she's a freak
Now she's a loner
Now she's a study
She's dieing
It's become a habit
For it to hit the floor
And spill her blood
All over the world
It's become a habit
For her to scream
And be so mean
For no apparent reason
She was wonderful
Now what is she now?
She was beautiful
Now what is she now?
She was so wonderful
Beautiful
Perfect
Now what is she now?
No one knows how
To fix the problem
Or even what it is
No one knows how
They can help
So they just stay away
She was so wonderful
Now what is she now?
She was so wonderful
Now what is she now?
She was so wonderful
Beautiful
Perfect
Now what is she now?
Author notes
When I was in elementary school I was so happy! I was everything my parents wanted me to be and even though I didn't have very many friends I was comfortable with the life I had. I wanted more but O well I couldn't have that. Then in 6th grade that all changed. My parents turned against me and to this day I still don't know why. I guess I just changed. But let me shut up... just read the poem.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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touched
this poem expressed all the things that are in me....i cant put it in any other words...and you put them for me...i am deeply touched by your poem. youre really good, each sentence and each word is placed carefully in the poem itself. keep on writing, express your thoughts, for they can only set you free
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I worked on this poem from 6th grade to now [10th] and I was finally satisfied with it. I would get one version and it wouldn't quite tell how I felt. But then I just finally left it alone. I'm glad you liked it.
~buni~
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