TEARS STREAMING
SOBS SOFTLY
NO MORE HURT
NO PAIN
SUFFERING ETERNAL
HURT BEYOND UNDERSTANDING
SUFFERING FOR A QUESTION
TEARS ARE MY OWN
SOBS I OWN
PAIN I BUY
YOU WASTED ME
YOU DRAINED ME
NO LOVE
NO HOPE
I SURVIVE
ALWAYS WILL
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- Sweetie, This Is What Broken Looks Like. by Heartbeatsxfading.
600 points, ended May 20, 2008, 39 entries
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.... cut like a knife........
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nice emotion but i would sugest only putting some parts in caps lock to emphasize on main points
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