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Sway

You sway in and out,
As you hear the flow of the music.
As you dance you hear,
the sweet memory of your past comes back.

You feel the music flow,
Right through your veins.
The power so strong,
But yet a feeling so strong.

As you hear the violins strum,
The bass drum beat.
Now way to express how it feels,
But your feeling exults.

 

Alas! it's finish,

But the power still there.

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  • Moonlit-Reveries
    March 30, 2007

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    Lovely entry. You captured the power of music very vividly here, I like how you described that lingering power and that's very true. Very nice.
    Best of luck in my contest