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how i wish to die - tribute to suicide

sometimes, in the wake of the moment
nothing can fix your day
it causes you to go into a frenzy
almost like having an actual seziure in mind


suddenly, everything
is upside down again
you dont know where you are
now or if it's then

things that you aren't aware of
become problems for you and me
they work against your heart and soul
and they eat at your half-rotting heart


suddenly, everything
is upside down again
you dont know where you are
now or if it's then

these emotions, that you think so little of
become the very enemy of you
that warp and twist and turn
they change your outlook on your life

suddenly, everything
is upside down again
you dont know where you are
now or if it's then

and then it comes, the dramatic rush of fear
that suddenly calms your truth
and makes you trust the ones in the darkness
and then you die...


suddenly, everything
is upside down again
you dont know where you are
now or if it's then

there isn't a reverse to suicide
there isn't a cure for pity
there isn't a cure for mental depression
everything is just your views...

(c) 2007 Lordess Yami Romich

***copy and paste this to stop suicide***

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  • XXStOlEn-HaLoXx
    March 30, 2007

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    This is purrrtyfull, Yami! lol This is good...I'm pasting this to my profile! Love ya

    love alwayz n foreva
    ~:~Tasha~:~


  • ItalianPride09
    March 30, 2007

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    Wow It is so true i feel alot of times when im depressed i just want to die i just dont want to be me i want to just be gone lost in another world not mine, Which makes me kinda suicidel but this poem kinda helps. Spelling i know!!!


  • Inspyred
    March 29, 2007
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    NICE I KNOW WHAT U MEAN USED TO FEEL LIKE THT A LOT