I love the way you look at me
The way your eyes just skim over my body
as thou i am the only person you see in the world
I love the way you say my name
like i am the only person you want to speak to
I just love the way you are when im around
Author notes
what i want
A contest entry
- Give Me REAL by Logans-Mommy.
500 points, ended August 27, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~A Simple Contest~ by forbidden-dreams.
370 points, ended September 2, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a really neat short poem...it shows a lot of emotion
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Nice write!
Very well wrote although I must mention by "thou" do you me "though" ?
Very emotionful piece..
Good luck and thanks for entering! -
mmmmm love...gotta love the feelings and emotions...espceially when all those feeling burst at u all at once...great write! I can feel what u feel just from reading it!
MINDIE
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