BROTHERS"
Brothers are supposed to stick together
I've always heard blood is thicker than water
Fuck i'd still do life for my brother
But the punk is afraid of our step father
The same man who has made his life better
The same man who pulled us all out of the gutter
But none of this shit really matters
Because my brother is'nt a true rider
He'll stand in front of a jury and point his finger
Really i could look past all that
But not when i'm disrespected for some lame crap
3 years in prison is'nt far from enough
I cant force him to visit he say's tough
For some reason i will always remember this
Regardless my love for my brother is faultless
The things i would do for him are endless
O well everyone makes mistakes
Mine was expecting him to do something he would'nt
His was thinking i was fake
Hay he might not have been told so,does'nt remember
Brothers are supposed to stick together
For me blood is and always will be thicker then water.
Jordon i wrote this because it was a way to vent
I put myself in prison,so none of this should really matter
love you baby bro
A contest entry
- Story time (tell me a story with blood or love) by Nadala.
450 points, ended April 7, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your best by Nyabbi.
354 points, ended April 8, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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please reread the rules. there has to be a hidden message and you have to use capital letters to flag which letters in the lines will go to gether in order from first letter of the first word to the last letter of the last word. if this isn't clear enough on top of my rules and i don't see a message in the poem in 3 days i'm booting you. not trying to be mean just consistant. -
Great job I really like this one an interesting story, good luck in the contest
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