How could I ignore the signs—
Those signs of im[perfect]ion?
[♥]
My t-shirt torn and [blood]ied
Laying .u.p.o.n. the floor
I just couldn’t make it—
Make it all the way!
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Catch me as I f-a-l-l
[♥]
Break through the wall
In my mind
Try to search
Try to find—
My sanity amongst the .t.e.a.r.s.
My bravery amongst the .f.e.a.r.s.
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♥
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this is an awesome poem, i loved the emotion in it
Break through the wall
In my mind
Try to search
Try to find—
My sanity amongst the .t.e.a.r.s.
My bravery amongst the .f.e.a.r.s.
that was definatly my favorite part i loved how you ended it! i could feel the emotion the whole time i was reading. keep writing
~Ashley~<3 -
Tis' an awesome poem you've writen darling! I can relate in a sense. i love it
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Wow, this was really good!
I was quite interested in what you were saying.
Nice write!
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Gah! You are too awesome!
xoxo,
Your Dumpster Doll -
OMFG....
wOW, THIS REALLY IS BEAUTIFUL.
You capture my attention with every word you write. Your brilliant.
luvvs
xxxx
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