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High School 'Fish'



Fear overtakes my heart and soul
As I walk through the dirty hall
I feel so 'grown-up' and that's all!!

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Hah! That was so fun to do!

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  • travis34dietC
    March 29, 2007

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    glad you thought this was fun! i like the rhyme of "hall" and "all". short and sweet! good job!
    thanks for entering and good luck!