I have come to the end of my journey,
feeling a sense of peace and solitude,
I am a silent witness,
to the aftermath of Armegeddon.
My steps are frozen,
eerie sounds surround me
as I view the whirlwind
of destruction.
At the end of the road,
I see wonders,
my view to the
light of Paradise.
The strands of my soul
are drawn, curling
towards the Light,
the realm of forever happiness.
While I hear evil sounds
surrounding me,
I forge ahead,
choosing to follow the road
to a future bright with promise.
I am drawn by His light
to greet the dawn of forever,
my haven of peace.
The evil cannot touch
a soul guided by His light...
Author notes
Picture by Helena P at deviantart.com
A contest entry
- Let Your Imagination Run Free #8 (Picture Contest) by Seeking Peace.
500 points, ended April 23, 2007, 24 entries
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This is a beautiful picture you have painted to go with the inspired pic, well done on a fabulous write
Thanks for taking the time to enter, I wish you the very best of luck
Karen -
I like your picture - open doorway to the sun.
But it appears to go down - easy way to run
I wonder if the negative could be reversed
And in that way bad attitudes might be inversed.
Because I think a picture, with an upward climb
Is more realistict-ly, right upon the dime
And conveys more readily the struggle we free
When we deliberately climb consciousnesses tree. -
What a great poem. THis is so well said.
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A positive uplifting piece that works very well indeed.Lovely flow to this one well done to you and good luck
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Beautiful interpretation
to this picture. We need not fear the dark when we walk in the light of our Lord.
"The evil cannot touch
a soul guided by His light"... Is my favorite phrase but maybe stronger as "No evil can touch
a soul guided by His light..."
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