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I see you in my dreams!

I see you in my dreams you are apart of me.
When we kissed we exchanged half of our souls.
Now I am apart of you and you are apart of me forever more.
Never changing or ignoring what we used to be.
As you slept by my side I tried to hide the fact that I still long for your kiss once again to bring back the half of me that I seem to have misplaced again. I see our love for ever frozen until the time that we are both gone. We will keep it forever locked in our hearts never wanting it to leave us. Never wishing it was different since it was as precious as gold. It is hard to let you go, because you are my Mr. Right this is why my heart flies to your side at night. It lies there to keep you safe and to keep away the nightmares that may try to haunt your dreams of love. You are the irreplaceable love the one and only for you complete me so perfectly like wings of a fallen angel. You are my wings that lift me high so that I may touch the sky where our heavenly father above watches over us.  Now times between us seem so far away as the pictures fade the memories we made will last forever in our hearts.  Until it is time for us to be together once again not ever feeling like we truly were apart at all that will be the most joyous day. Where our love will burn a raging fire, because of our desire to be with each other this will truly be our victory. As we gaze in to the stars wishing upon them that we will never part again, which would truly be a sin of the heart that beats within. If we were to ever say goodbye once more.

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  • Nidaeah
    October 27, 2008

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    Nice

    Nice poem, but the color scheme you picke dis a bit difficult on the eyes, and you used the word love. Sorry, but best of luck in the future!

  • Cena-of-Destiny
    October 6, 2008
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    very good but i wanted a poem.


  • XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX
    August 5, 2008
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    this is great. it seems more like a letter tho


  • PureRomance
    November 10, 2007

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    This is amazing

    I love this poem. It would be awesome to be in that kind of love. I agree with you 100% I look forward to reading more of yours. You are truly gifted. I'm glad you agreed to let me IM you. awesome job with this poem again. I loved it.


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    March 29, 2007
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    Oh to be in such a love would be awsome but now that love is gone

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