Black dog comin down,
Black dog comin down.
Black dog howl at moon,
I知 comin home soon.
Black dog at my window,
Black dog is my shadow.
Black dog howl at moon,
I知 comin home soon.
Black dog in the rain,
Black dog is my pain.
Black dog howl at moon,
I知 comin home soon.
Black dog digs my hole,
Black dog soothes my soul.
Black dog howl at moon.
I知 comin home soon.
Black dog knows my name,
Black dog knows my shame.
Black dog howl at moon,
I知 comin home soon.
Black dog watch me grown,
Black dog takes me home.
Black dog howls at moon,
I知 home.
Author notes
This was apoem inspired my something that happened to me recently done in the style of a blues song.
Please tell me what you think
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Ohh very nice darling. I like the notes you included after the poem. Going back and rereading these as blues lyrics makes it that much more chilling. Although I am left with the question, what happened?
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They're right
the comments below r right..this poem is creative..good job you!
Keep writing!
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i own a black dog
you know whats worse then crossing paths with a black cat? A black dog! Very symbolic and i liked it alot.
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very creative! i really like the rhythm. great job, you should be proud!
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This is a great poem. You put so much thought into it. Great job.
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I like this poem dude, Did you know the black dog means death because thats a good poem if you did. Talk to me sometime.
I love your work.
El.
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wow, this is really good sweety. i love the flow and the whole them. the black dog is the animal that hunts me yet protects me. very well written
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its sad... but i like it. and using a black dog to symbolize death... classic. its awesome.
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Oh, well this sounds fairly sad. Oh geez, now I may just start crying
~Sith
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