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What is true love?

What is true love?
Is it liking a boy (or girl)?
Is it hugging?
Or is it sharing a toy
What is true love?
Is it when you love someone?
Is it when you make them  a card for Valentines' Day?
Or when you give them the card when you are done?
What is true love?
Is it the one you feel you'll marry?
Is it when you dream about them?
or when you dream that we got married.

Author notes

You know i just realized that true love is when someone likes you for who you are. True love is when you really like each other. And now i have someone to share that with.

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  • sportsfreak
    March 31, 2007
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    well true love is when they send you flowers just becouse it's friday.thats wats true love.


  • One Eunique Pixie
    March 29, 2007

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    I liked this piece until it got to the last lne. I think that it needs to be changed. The entire poem was concrete stuff until you got to the abstract kind of thing there with the last line. Thanks for sharing. Love and Peace, Charlene.