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Moths (Haiku)

Do moths have feelings?
While they're flying into flames.
We may never learn.

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Ok, I don't actually know if this is Haiku or Senyru. But I wrote it anyway

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  • purplebubbles
    April 10, 2007
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    hmhm i disagree with though cookie, i think it is a haiku, it has the format and it talks about the feelings and thoughts of you towards a moth, which is something from nature.
    I think moths are fascinating creatures, and i applaud your courage and great haiku, cos i enjoyed it.


  • SarahD
    March 29, 2007
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    I would describe this as a senyru poem! I think that haiku is more strictly to do with nature and this poem has more of a thought process, an element of contemplation - that makes it more of a senyru with delves into feelings and thoughts (so I'm told).
    Thanks for a wonderful entry and good luck!
    Sarah xx