Listen to the thunderous theme,
to the music poured from Him;
marbles dropped on crystal floor,
wind in search of ocean's door.
Listen to the march of bells,
chimes crescendo's passionate spells;
hear the heartbeat of the All,
thunderous whisper of His Call:
Who am I, the God of All,
who am I, the Rise and Fall;
who am I, the Word of Womb,
be my Pulse, my Love, my Soul.
Partake in the Play of God,
rolling marbles, play the Word;
music of the timeless blood,
motion of the passionate gut.
Linked by Life's gossamer strings,
lifted by Love's spreading wings;
from the spindle to soul's Swirl,
whorl of Wonderment's coiled curl.
Breathe deeply, oh Cosmic Lungs,
feel the air compressed in song;
rise into my ever-Soul,
die in Me to make you whole.
I, the One from which is spun
tender flesh, all metal wrung;
I, the gentleness of gain,
I, the loss of soul's deep pain.
Holy name marked on all hearts,
sacred stars secured by charts
etched into the eyes of those
who seek Sight, who strive so bold.
Sing your heart, pour out your whole,
I am forever within your soul;
to end of no end, before the start,
never a time we were apart.
Sing our song of sacred love,
sing Me gifts of all above;
with ancient drum and strum to come,
all souls combined in endless Song.
Adore the spirit of all things,
fly your song on blessed wings;
listen to this thunderous Theme,
to this Song, this Hymn of Him.
Woven threads of souls now seen,
everlasting golden gleam;
pillars of new Earth are swung,
Silence where all once begun.
Devon&Myra
Author notes
Thank you for this wonderful Collaboration Myra, it is indeed a joy to sing these songs with you
Please tell me what you think
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Wow
Loved the rhyme scheme and the pure passion you feel about your inspiration.
Well done both of you....
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wonderful collaboration...
Very well done..
Kudos to you both
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this is really really goood i like it alot ...!its really well writen and it makes you feel the depth of the poem.
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Good work
Hey u hav don some great work in this poem.That s great and too much philosophical.
The greatest part is:
Who am I?the god of all
Who am I?the rise and fall
Who am I?the wrod of womb
be my pulse,my love ,mysoul
The very philosophical part of the poem.
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Wow this was a strong piece of poetry. I could feel thje passion of the words and your fiath comes in loid and clear. It feels very strong indeed.
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i'm impressed with how well written this is. your theme rings true and never drops a beat. the rhyme is not bumpy or forced. i say 'well done!'
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Superb/Inspirational/Challenging
Wow, what a thunderous beat this poem has. I heard His/Her music all the way through indeed, almost if Thor were here again. Again, well done.
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Excellent
This is truly a beautiful and well crafted work of art. It is one of the best works I have seen on this site since I have been a member. Bravo!!!
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Beautiful!!
Wow!! you both did such a fabulous job on this one!! You both make a wonderful pair to write together. This was very rewarding to read!!
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the message within this write is awesome. thank you for sharing its elegance with me. a very well written collaboration. viyanna rosemarie
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The strong voice captures the readers attention and holds on. I always say I don't really care for long poetry (tiny attention span), but you've proven me wrong here. I really enjoyed the flow and rhythm, and Ii particularly enjoyed the lines: 'I, the One from which is spun/tender flesh, all metal wrung/'. Great write!
Crestfallen
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I am in awe at the beauty of this piece. You two should work on more pieces together. It's like reading a duet. Bravo!!
Cheryl
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brilliant
totally wicked. I think that your choice of words is just awsome kepp them coming -
Excellent.
This is an excellent collaboration and the whole piece is outstanding. I am glad that I clicked on it. One part of my morning devotion is to read these pieces of poetry. You did very well.
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I am still in awe ...
thank you for sending me music inspiring these Words written in Evertimelessness.
Love, always,
Myra
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