Remember me, before I died
Remember me, as one who tried
Remember, that I loved to live.
Remember all I hoped to give.
Remember me, in years to come.
Remember, all the deeds I've done.
Just remember me.
Author notes
That's it really!
A contest entry
- design your own epitatph by Dull Red.
340 points, ended May 4, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely words
I am sure with all your poems you will be remembered
I hope you have them safe. I am sure you will be remembered for your deeds as well.
I am sure we all want to think that we will be remembered after we have gone.
Dixie
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i like this piece's honesty and how it is just so true and to the point. you captured an emotion plenty of us could relate to. job well done.
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yes, i think thats something we all want:
to be remembered and remembered well -
Isn't this what we all want? We just want to be
remembered, for something, for anything. I really wonder what they will say about me? This is really good. -
Wonderful ! This is a great entry in this contest and I wish you well with it 
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in the end if we are true to ourselves that is really what most of us want most. i prefer the short poem to the epic. just seems to the that the short one pack more wallop or punch in them. they usually only make one point and to me the best way to get your points or thoughts across is best done one at a time. the epic overwelms the reader to often and they stop listening and start hurrying to the end.
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Nice one Ann. I will place a few flowers for you. Good luck in the contest. Hope you beat me. It won`t be difficult!
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