Overcast dark clouds
Showering day periapt
Splashing boots playful,
Slicker glisten through
Spring morning wading green brush
Smiling little girls,
Sputter forceful rain
Puddles splash pouring utter
Springtime wishful dance,
Peeking through cloudburst
Sun awaits arrival to
Break perception.
In a list
A contest entry
- haiku chain by risewiththesmoke.
687 points, ended April 11, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thank you
this was the first time doing a haiku chain. I'm glad you liked my poem. Hale7 -
this was really good. I like the haiku. i almost didnt notice hahaha. i loved the imagery too... i could actually see it.
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Thank you, this my first time writing a haiku chain. I'm glad you liked my poem. Haley27
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this is really cool, it really made me feel like i was there in the rainstorm. great imagery (esp. the second one). thanks for entering!!
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