I touched
I tasted.
I loved.
Is there more?
A contest entry
- design your own epitatph by Dull Red.
340 points, ended May 4, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So much said in so few words
Well done and best of luck in this contest. 
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so simple yet obviously so beautiful and well-done. amazing.
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This is lovely, would be a lovely thing to put on your gravestone. Could capitalise the I's, but I'm just being picky here. But lovely overall.
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I Think You Covered It All..............
Here with this. There is no more thanthat to write on a tombstone if indeeed all these things were accomplished in ones life. The only thing I would add would be a Tribute of some sort letting everyone know I had gone on to a better place in Heaven with my Lord and savior Jesus Christ!!!!!!Thanks for sharing this short but nice piece!!!~~Toni~~
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This was good! It think I would have ended it
"That is enough" but thats me not you. I liked the philisphical journey this starts ones mind on. -
Thought provoking, simple and says so much, just one question.... did you live?
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no,no more in this life but wouldn't it be nice to think that somewhere up there was another chance.
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Brilliant - I think you've covered it all in those four lines!
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got it in one straight to the point cant stand long winded bullshit hey you are born you live then you die end of the story.
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