Angel whom was sent from God,to many a blessing,
a shining star illuminating a darkened night.
Strong for those who needed her love and understanding,
a shoulder to lean on, arms that embraced others tight.
The true meaning of kindness and so very much more,
leaving her footprints on the hearts of all she did touch.
Even when weak herself, she gave all she had to another,
heart and soul beautiful, she will be missed very much.
Author notes
I always wanted to be remembered for what I was to others, how I made them feel. Tonight a friend shared it with me..and I took her words and made my epitaph..Thank you Mysticstorm..for seeing me.
A contest entry
- design your own epitatph by Dull Red.
340 points, ended May 4, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very beautifully done. i like how this is different since it is prose. aside from that, just vivid and well done.
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And so you shall be remembered for your kindness and dedication to the way others feel.
A fantastic poem and definitely worthy of a Gold trophy....
And three little weird smilin' yellow guys dancin'...
Jeffro
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absolutle amazing
This was very beautiful write and i agree with every word and i agree with your friend this is how you make all of us who love you feel and for that we are all truly blessed very nice wok.......your poet
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