This is just a reminder
My body lies not under your feet
Twas thrown into the lush forest,
Forged by nature; eternal recurrence.
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I don't think i'll be buried, well, i'd rather not be
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- design your own epitatph by Dull Red.
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hmm my one suggestion is to not use semi-colons in the first two lines. aside from that, i really like this poem. in a couple of lines, you capture a really deep meaning. job well done.
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Thanks for the suggestions, I go over-board with punctuation sometimes, hehe.
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Hmmm. Good luck talking your loved ones into throwing you into the forest. I have been trying to talk my family into having me creamated rather than buried for ages and no one is listening. As my mom said
"We are going to bury you unless you can find a way to stop us!"
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I'll put it in my will, if they don't throw me in the woods, i'll haunt em and their kids, hehe
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reminds me of my cat
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