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Advice from a Younger Sister.


Keep those legs crossed, missy
because the music ends with a definite
bang [oh.. I forgot. that's what you're doing.
Screwing the music instead of listening.]
and you're bound to get kicked from the chair.
Would you then lose more than hemoglobin?
Pop a few more blood cells to
substitute for all the work you did for us. Each one
is another bullet wasted that you
could have used to kill the hate.

["But I thought you hated nobody..?"]
You're too 'angel[demon]ic' to do so.

That halo- glass or plastic? hangs
over your delicate [dyed] hair [straw]
trying not to be broken by every foul-mouthed
prayer you utter in suspense
of race-inspired orgasms to come.
Whisper those sayings against the evil you create
-It's coming for you-

Or maybe you're just coming.
All the requests for constant salvation
are off-key and strangled when they escape
as fingers
underneath your miniskirt.

So
smile: you're perfect and it was your year to win
before you tried to fuck everything up.
Before the monster's mark burned your skin
[this 'beauty' written in Japanish Gibberish pricked you in
the ego and left a scar.]
and immersed you into nighttime activities. Imp your way
into another manwhore's heart, because
it's really the only place
where you belong anymore.




Love ya, sis!



[I hope you choke on your tiara.]






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Author notes


'Best looking' my ass.


You should see her without makeup.



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  • kitzit
    April 6, 2007
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    Hm...yes, I've seen her without makeup...lol. I like it, we write rather well when emotional, don't we? Hope she figures out what a monster she's become before she looses you for an eternity.....shouldn't be much longer now.....if she doesn't, who neeeds her right?


  • LivingxXxProof
    March 29, 2007
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    Wow jess, I wish i could see her without her makeup. And take a pic. And send it to the year book. ^.~ hehe. lol I can see where this came from, geeze why'd you write this you 'man stealing whore' XD =P lol love ya Jess. This is great,And five bucks says you smiled big after you wrote it. lol


  • mooseman25
    March 29, 2007

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    laughing at your sisters expression when she reads this shit

    GO Jess,get the skag!Damn but you can be an angry little creature when you want to be.Well,hope you keep writing this good.keep it up.

  • Errant Panther gold member
    March 28, 2007

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    What a great introspective look at modern sister-hood. I love the asides in brackets, that come across as the true meaning behind the words said kept within closed minds and behind a carefully controlled tongue. Awesome write.

  • xXLucid-CatalystXx
    March 28, 2007

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    ..speechless..

    I highly admire this.....You write from a higher-advanced level...or I'm just slap-happy.......A thousand mortal applauses for you!

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