Lightly licking little Lola's love-hole
I loved her little lilting lithely laughs
With lustful lips licked lively on her lotus
I lapped her lusty labia in halves
Lasciviously I labored at her lily
I licked and lapped and lovingly I'd flick her
'Till languishing in lust the lovely lady
Unloaded her love liquid on her licker
Author notes
LOL
In a list
A contest entry
- Hummina Hummina Hummina! by kindred spirit.
600 points, ended April 7, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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great tongue twister, a right mouthfull and definately one to get the tongue around
ha ha ha congratulations on your new gold trophy 
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So very graphic but still works well, especially for the lickee. lol
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You know, I don't understand how graphic is a bad thing, especially if we are discussing something that is almost universally enjoyed. I have no problem admitting that I wrote that poem, and even less of a problem admitting that I did lots of research on it. Thanks for your comment.
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Smile-had some good eating, EH?
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Fabulous. Creative and brilliant, Lola really is one lucky woman.
-Allura
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Thanks. There are advantages to being a poet and a cunning linguist!
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I agree. Nothing more fortunate to possess than a skilled tongue.
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Sorry to disagree, but the skilled imagination trumps all!
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Ah, but I don't think you can have a "skilled" imagination; comes naturally, and so happens to inspire the tongue and help it become so skilled.
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I love Alliteration so I guess that is what I loved most about your poem It is funny in the way it is written and the background is a perfect match.
I enjoyed reading this.. naughty and funny at the same time.
Good job, keep on writing and good luck in the contest.
Nooni
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Haha, I haven't come across too many tongue twisters on here... and an erotic tongue twister... I probably would have never thought to try something like that... I like this for the idea alone, haha good deal.
The only dependable thing about the future is Uncertainty.
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how awesome! this is wonderful! (not only because of the subject matter!!) the word choices are so good. i love the floral references. the flow is flawless. it reads so well! lola's a lucky lady! great job!!
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rofl
what a fabulously creative tounge twister!
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OMG...extreme...visuals...and well this picture in the background did not help the visuals....say this 5 times while drinking.....lol.....good job....
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How did the picture not help? It helped me? I won't tell you what it makes me think. Thanks for the comment.
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