...She sits against the bleak gray wall,
scars and bleeding wounds a sign of
insanity ever clear,
She misses that painful kiss
...the one where the beer
&& and the nicotine linger
against her tongue,
that instant high
of envy and want.
Tears mix with the rain,
as the moon,
casts the shadow of the Incubus
&& Succubus as they dance;
cackling of the misfortune of
the dreary human race.
The silver of the blade glints against
the light,
d
r
i
p
by
d
r
i
p
(*The blood*) pools
as her breathing starts to slow,
trading demons
for ^bubble^ *g*u*m* nightmares of
death, and ~suicide~
W\a\l\k\i\n\g th*ro*ugh the cemetery the souls
grab onto her wrists,
pleading [[for her to hold onto life]]
"Pray for us, O Holy Mother of God,
that we may be made worthy of the promises of Christ. "
Screeching slaves of the underworld beg to save a precious soul.
As she d
e
s
c
e
n
d
s
into hell...
she realizes,
belongs...
Author notes
Hmm. I HATE WRITERS BLOCK WITH A FUCKING PASSION.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow you write so uniquly....heheeee I know what a Succubus is....I loved the words you used the were so blunt yet suttle and had such poetic grace to them....great write keep it up!
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I hate writers block too, but you seem to be pulling out of it well...this poem has so much imagery and its sucha fabulous dirty pretty write! You have talent in this form...something not everyone has...you should be proud of this piece!!
Screeching slaves of the underworld beg to save a precious soul.
As she d
e
s
c
e
n
d
s
into hell...
she realizes,
belongs...My favorite part....finally finding a sense of belonging. This is great hunny, keep it up!! :)
XCandyCoatedXtacyX
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wow, I really like it. Its amazing how somethings come out. I also like the setup of how it's written, it looks amazing.
Thanks for the comment by the way!
♥
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Hmmmm....not really sure what to think here. Personally its a bit strange yet...intruiging and raw with honesty and emotion!! So, well done, you brought your point across in an artistic way!!
Well, as for the WB - think this was a great attempt, keep on trying, this too shall pass
Fucking A!!!!
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A+
I am a big fan of that- dirty pretty thing......You captivated it wonderfully!
Strangely you don't seem to have a writer's blockade....lol, anyways takecare
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Thank you sweetie!!! that gives me great confidence!!!!
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