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Magick Stone

Ghosts in the closet?
Monsters under the bed?
Goblins in the Corner?
Nightmares in your head?

Werewolves in the backyard?
Vampires in the front?
Creepies in the shadows?
Crazies in the ward?

Zombies in the basement?
Beasties in the vents?
Spiders in the woodpile?
Pookas in the shed?

Hiding under blankets
Flashlight at the ready
squirtgun close at hand

Feary Dream Stones will protect you
from the worst that creep and crawl

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  • Procrastination
    October 3, 2007
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    Wow, this is so awesome, so cute, so, just, awww!
    I'm speechless! I really am! Which is a miracle for me not to talk! =]
    I was a little kid afraid of opening the wardrobe, going across the landing in the dark, this shows the thoughts that were running through my mind at the ages four through eight!
    Chemical Kisses,
    Emily x


  • mandi3939
    October 3, 2007

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    Cute! I liked the way it was innocent and full of childish fears. Had you not used some of the language you did "beasties, creepies" it might not have worked as well. Loved the Hiding under blankets - that whole stanza just really made it.


  • dr3a-martin3z
    October 3, 2007

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    halloween ready

    I see ya ready for holloween...i loved the way you rhymed this... made me think of what i should be this year........have a good one!!! And I love the poem.......drea