Under this dirt here lies a liar,
A cheat, a scoundrel, someone to admire.
He lived like any bastard would;
trying to steal as much as he could.
His life was a good one,
Happy, long, and sweet
By the end he weighed a ton
with awful stinky feet.
But now he's down under
hanging out with Satan.
body and soul asunder,
he will never straighten.
Author notes
Just a funny little blip I wrote for this contest.
A contest entry
- design your own epitatph by Dull Red.
340 points, ended May 4, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love feedback!
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hmm very interesting. i like how you made this different by contrasting the usual epitatph which is commonly flowerly and one-dimensonal.
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haha this was a good one.
at first I though it was very serious,
but it made me smile towards the end.
would be an interesting piece on a gravestone.
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Very well done entry for this rather strange contest 
Good luck to you in the contest.
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LOL- my favorite part was- he lived like any bastard would, trying to steal as much as he could.
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This is a good concept. Though it kinda sounded to me like you should be a horrible person cause hangin with satan is fun..well i guess that might be your point. im not knocking it, im just saying it threw me off. the rhyme scheme seemed forced...but its pretty much a diddy so it doesnt matter. Love and Peace, Charlene.
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Excellent.
Another great write. I like it.. Sweet and to the point LOL....
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Lol this would get them talking. What an awesome write, best of luck.
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