What secrets have been buried here?
What memories unearthed?
I would like to have seen my life as greater,
Better.
But here I lie, deep as all.
Time is the great equalizer.
A contest entry
- design your own epitatph by Dull Red.
340 points, ended May 4, 2007, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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OOOh very true and deep. And it sums up just about everyone doesnt it?
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This is very true, and very well written. I love it. If I had to chose I'd want something like this on my tombstone. Thanks for sharing. Love and Peace, Charlene.
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very good meaning you provide to your reader. i liked how you conveyed the somber mood so well too. also, i liked the backround. nicely done. rock on.
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