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The Evil Arts



Evil Wizard says:

You know you want the evil arts
It's everything you love
To sacrifice a virgin's life
To drink her pure sweet blood

Thus gaining an eternal life
From the life that once was hers
Black magic surging through your veins
The secret that is yours

To rule the realm of all you see
And to boast of Satan's power
Have ev'rything your heart desires
It's time, it is your hour

Don't let desire for virture lure
You away from all your dreams
You'll never satisfy your wants
Till you seek evil things


The Magician says:

You've convinced me I do admit
And now evil I do choose
Your argument has proven true
There's nothing I've to lose

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  • PoetsAngel
    March 31, 2007

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    Nothing better on a Saturday night to read a wonderful dark write by you my friend, and again I am not disappointed
    Cathy


    • Andy Stephenson
      March 31, 2007
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      Thanks, Cathy

      Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I do like dark writes. If you would like some really dark stuff, I could give you the link to some of my short stories. I write a lot of different things. Thanks for dropping by.

      Andy


  • Oleander
    March 29, 2007
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    cool poem


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 29, 2007

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    Ooooooo I thought this write was really deep and most profound. You always have that wonderful twist at the end where the whole piece comes together perfectly.
    All the best with this Andy
    Gaylene


    • Andy Stephenson
      March 29, 2007
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      Thanks again.

      I love all the applause. Thanks, but I was just following the instructions of the contest host. I tried to make it satisfy him. I'm just a trophy whore. I'm glad you like this poem.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 28, 2007

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    hmmmm, interesting poem you have here, i like it, brings up some good points, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


    • Andy Stephenson
      March 29, 2007
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      Thanks, Aaron

      Thanks for reading and commenting. I was being a contest whore again, trying to please the contest host. I am glad you like this.


  • Neophyte
    March 28, 2007
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    Nice rhyme scheme, good write up
    thank you for entering


    • Andy Stephenson
      March 29, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thanks for hosting the contest, reading and commenting. I hope this is what you were looking for in your contest. May you have many great entries and lots of fun.


      • Neophyte
        April 11, 2007

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        As you did and I enjoyed it very much so. I'm not one to follow all my needs, so I would have nothing against you if you bended it in any way.

        Good luck to you


  • requiempoet gold member
    March 28, 2007

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    omg flippin' Criss Angel, he's such a flippin' hottie and he's talented as all hell!!! But this is a great poem!! I do say.


    • Andy Stephenson
      March 28, 2007
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      Yes. I guess.

      I rather borrowed his picture for this contest. It seemed the best I could find. I don't really know Criss Angel. Tell me about him.

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