Tears,, blood&&vomit
Can you recognise me
NOW?
Smeared mascara&&khol
I said I was o[fucking]kay
LIE
Fallen stars&&glittered scars
I told you I fell
LAME
Black eyes&&split lips
Am I awful?
YES
Rib bones&&sunken eyes
Am i beautiful?
WHORE
Second-hand casket&&an un-marked grave
Will you mourne for me?
NEVER
A suicide&&a letter
Where were you when I needed you
Heroine
Author notes
Inspired by "From First To Last"'s "Heroine"
i like (licking windows)
XxFix.Me.In.45xX <--
A contest entry
- GIVE ME SOME GORGEOUS *DIIIRTY PRETTY*!!! by KissMeGoodnight.
525 points, ended April 15, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A r e You D i r t y When Your P r e t t y? (PREWRITES ALLOWED!) by KittieLyyn.
300 points, ended March 31, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dirty Pretty by CazzieJade.
450 points, ended April 27, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [Baby Tug The String On My Back, Maybe I'll Breathe A Little Longer.] by SarahEatsAirplane.
343 points, ended August 21, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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just wanna remind you that if you have more than one entry in my contest, please put your name in authors comments (in every poem you enter)
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have i entered more than once!
>.<
i didnt even notice...
thnx for the heads up
cookies&&[love]
xXintimateXx
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Thats beautiful.
You captured dirty pretty in that peice.
Plus I love that song.
Well done and good luck.
Cazza -
Great job it's unique and short!!! btw I love your author name
* a fellow requiem * -
beautiful
thanks for entering.
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wow. i am such a fan of raw edgy poetry. it's what i love, and this was great. awesome job.
much love,
the existentialist -
oooohhhhhh......
like wow. I love this sooo much. The way you have set it out really helps top create the mood too.
'tears blood and vomit' an interesting concept here. It's actually klinda pretty in a 'dirty' sense.
luvvs
xxx
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This was beautiful...you totally captured the escence of dirty pretty!
Second-hand casket&&an un-marked grave
Will you mourne for me?
NEVER
I think that's one of my favourite lines, but there are too many good ones to chose from
I love how the song inspired you...it fits.
From First To Last Rules!!!!!
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oh my god! my mouth dropped! this is awesome! <3 LOVE LOVE LOVE! lol
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i love your face picture
go go GIR!&&piggy
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