Tonite; you & I will make history
As the two who beat mortality
You and me for all eternity
And tonite; we'll let this go
For ever and for always
The dark of our hearts
Fuels a flame unseen by the rest
Oh no, they just don't understand
Your heartbeat is the rythm
Of all the days I've lived
And your slow & steady breathing
Is the keeper of my sanity
Beneath this luanr sunrise
We hold close
Eternity envies you & I
For time is held, unmoving, in our gaze
And as forever slips us by
I can make this; I can make this
If you're by my side
Forever is ours♥
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ily. <33
HOLLA;
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"Eternity envies you & I
For time is held, unmoving, in our gaze"
This is a beautiful piece. Beautiful, be proud that you wrote it. Truly sparkling and wonderful. I like the story and the imagry, its romantic and just.... wonderful. Well done, it pulled at my heartstrings and left me wanting more. Wonderful work! I LOVE IT!!!!!!
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This was really well written and had an awesome flow to it. I liked the way it started, and loved the way it ended. and all the stuff in between, is really awesome!
Good write.
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Your heartbeat is the rythm
Of all the days I've lived
And you slow & steady breathing
Is the keeper of my sanity"
that's my favorite stanza.
-J_E_N_N-
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