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the Shadow In the Rain.





LOOK AT MY LOVELY IMAGE`
THE FOUNTAIN AND WALLS,
FOR JUST A BRIEF SECOND
MY GAZE IT DOES FALL


DON`T LOOK AT THE FOUNTAIN
ALL CLASSY AND LAME,
DON`T LOOK AT THE WALLS
ALL HISTORIC AND VAIN.


FOR HIDDEN IN THE SHADOWS
SHIVERING IN THE COLD,
THERE IS HOMELESS SOUL
ALL CRUMPLED UP IN PAIN.


Written By

Carl Spencer

29th March 2007

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  • kjack
    January 16

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    That is so beautiful and sad. It hurts me so much to see someone that is homeless. My heart aches to think about it. This was beautifully done my friend. I love this one.