Help me light the past on fire
for the flame in our hearts,
Scatter ashes on the graves
full of broken body parts -
and the innocence I never really got to have.
Because these memories don't need to stay buried
and i'd like to share them with you
If you'll let me
and I'd like to let you wipe away the tears
If you'd want to
and if you'd love me...
and if I let you...
you can have my soul
naked, and exposed, and though I'm a little
. damaged .
I will love you
with everything I have
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You're poetry is...
I never feel worthy of reading it.
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A Beautiful Re-Alignment of Stars, && Proof That Angst Can Have Quality
Excellent job, sweets.
I really liked this.
Made me feel a bit down, sure, but sometimes a good poem should do that.
The feeling you showed towards the end was very strong, and brilliantly expressed.
Loving these lines:
"Help me light the past on fire
for the flame in our hearts,
Scatter ashes on the graves
full of broken body parts -"
-Allura
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Amazing Sweet pea your words are like a candle in the dark,and from one so young.I think this is great,I'm glad I got the chance to read it.Thanks.Shug
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