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"Freedom"

Unchained melody

  peace within

no matter what race

  we all give grace

No ties that bind

much love we find

No hate to be found

we spread love all

        around

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  • erininthesky
    June 4, 2007

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    Simple and sweet... I love it... my favorite line is "no ties that bind" because it reminds me of a book that I once read. Great job! ♥ Erin


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    April 24, 2007
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    lovely

    you explain how it should all be


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 18, 2007

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    A Truthful and brilliant piece

    This is so very true. Wonderful sentiments to be thinking about. This is a really good piece of writing that everyone should take to heart. The world would be a better place for sure. Well done.

    Wayne

  • Topaz
    April 13, 2007

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    Beautiful

    oooh, I like this poem a lot. My favorite lines

    "Not Hate to be found,
    we spread love all around"

    Such a peaceful poem.


  • Laura
    April 9, 2007

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    orhhh kathy this is beautiful...this poem gives off such a calming feeling well done love i adore it xxx
    laura xxxxx


  • my life end 5-6-06
    April 4, 2007
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    wow i love your writing its really god keep up the good work...
    Love ya...Ashley Nikkole


  • Dusty
    April 3, 2007

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    Short but sweet just how i like my poems.
    I like it when there is no scrolling just simple feeling written in a blunt manner

  • Anno
    April 3, 2007

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    Short pointed, powerful

    In a nutshell, a well strung together piece, it is what is. As a result it is very powerful. Well done.


  • SweetRoses
    March 31, 2007

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    Sweet. This brought a smile to my face. I really like it. Very nicely done.


  • PastelMoons gold member
    March 31, 2007

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    How lovely..Your work is like sunshine..so warm ,bright and nurturing...I know it sounds corny , but  true nonetheless..You always put a smile on my face..Thanks sweetie Great work!

  • Bob Fox
    March 30, 2007
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    Nice

    And I do love the song. Just to have peace. But how my friend


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 30, 2007
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    Wonderful Writing

    Brilliant piece of writing here. I love this. This is so true too. Truth in such a small piece. Wonderful writing here. Keep writing.


  • purpledragonfly
    March 29, 2007

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    so true and right to the point !!! if only we could get this through to everyone keep up the writing!
    Betsy


  • Lucky 2006
    March 29, 2007

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    Excullent

    I think ths is a excullent wright and it makes sense... It makes people think about things and I think that it is a good write because it is saying that we need to treat everyone with kindness... Keep on writing and reading....


  • Inside and out
    March 28, 2007

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    This is such an uplifting poem. These words should be on everyone's mirror...to start each day. Wonderfully written. Well done dear poet.


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    March 28, 2007

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    fantastic

    This is exactly what i need right now. How on earth did you know? I have been revamping an old poem of mine called "Katrina" and my tears started to flow. I wanted to put it back up for Easter. I'm not feeling my best so I was going to just a warm bath and trun in early when I noticed you were online. So, I saw "Freedom" and the rest is history. Dynamic message. My favorite kind of poem, a few words with a big message. I this it is again a master piece............. This one I no THE LORD sent to me through you.... there is no other answer..... I am just praising HIS name now, because I know HE does know my every need..... HE caused our paths to cross for a reason.... Thank you so much for this up lift to my down spirt.... Tell your Mother I say thank her for you....
    Be blessed!
    Joyce


  • learn2luv4real
    March 28, 2007
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    this is nice with a sweet rhyme.

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