Unchained melody
peace within
no matter what race
we all give grace
No ties that bind
much love we find
No hate to be found
we spread love all
around
Please tell me what you think
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Simple and sweet... I love it... my favorite line is "no ties that bind" because it reminds me of a book that I once read. Great job! ♥ Erin
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lovely
you explain how it should all be -
A Truthful and brilliant piece
This is so very true. Wonderful sentiments to be thinking about. This is a really good piece of writing that everyone should take to heart. The world would be a better place for sure. Well done.
Wayne
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Beautiful
oooh, I like this poem a lot. My favorite lines
"Not Hate to be found,
we spread love all around"
Such a peaceful poem.
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orhhh kathy this is beautiful...this poem gives off such a calming feeling well done love i adore it xxx
laura xxxxx
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wow i love your writing its really god keep up the good work...
Love ya...Ashley Nikkole
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Short but sweet just how i like my poems.
I like it when there is no scrolling just simple feeling written in a blunt manner -
Short pointed, powerful
In a nutshell, a well strung together piece, it is what is. As a result it is very powerful. Well done.
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Sweet. This brought a smile to my face. I really like it. Very nicely done.
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How lovely..Your work is like sunshine..so warm ,bright and nurturing...I know it sounds corny , but true nonetheless..You always put a smile on my face..Thanks sweetie Great work!
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Nice
And I do love the song. Just to have peace. But how my friend
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Wonderful Writing
Brilliant piece of writing here. I love this. This is so true too. Truth in such a small piece. Wonderful writing here. Keep writing.
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so true and right to the point !!! if only we could get this through to everyone keep up the writing!
Betsy
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Excullent
I think ths is a excullent wright and it makes sense... It makes people think about things and I think that it is a good write because it is saying that we need to treat everyone with kindness... Keep on writing and reading....
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This is such an uplifting poem. These words should be on everyone's mirror...to start each day. Wonderfully written. Well done dear poet.
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fantastic
This is exactly what i need right now. How on earth did you know? I have been revamping an old poem of mine called "Katrina" and my tears started to flow. I wanted to put it back up for Easter. I'm not feeling my best so I was going to just a warm bath and trun in early when I noticed you were online. So, I saw "Freedom" and the rest is history. Dynamic message. My favorite kind of poem, a few words with a big message. I this it is again a master piece............. This one I no THE LORD sent to me through you.... there is no other answer..... I am just praising HIS name now, because I know HE does know my every need..... HE caused our paths to cross for a reason.... Thank you so much for this up lift to my down spirt.... Tell your Mother I say thank her for you....
Be blessed!
Joyce
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this is nice with a sweet rhyme.
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