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Young Love

The night was young and so was our love
Nothing stood in our way
We were so anxious to leave our past behind
We dreamed about it every day

Hand in hand we would run so far
Trying to leave this place and time
Searching for answers to our unfulfilled lives
Seeing things we never could because we were blind

We were so limited to what we could do
Our hearts yearned for more each day
We knew that somehow we had to escape
Together we would find a way

We left our lives to fate
We put out hearts in each other's hands
We knew that it had to be that way
Because no one would ever understand

All of the pain and sorrow
That we went through each day
All of the hurt and lies
That would always come our way

It wasn't something that we wanted to do
We never wanted it to be that way
It was just so heartbreaking for me to see her cry
I always promised her that I would take her away

I promised her a life filled with happiness and love
And all the things that she needed to survive
I promised her that I would always be there for her
And I'll keep that promise until the day that I die

I love her more than anything
She means the world to me
Words could never describe all that I feel for her
She is my destiny

And with every beat of my heart
With every breath that I take
I will be by her side forevermore
Never allowing her heart to break

And if I should ever falter
I pray that she will understand
For my heart is filled with so much love
So much more than I had ever planned

Sometimes we would run for what seemed like forever
Never looking back at what we left behind
We always looked to the future and not the past
Trying to find some peace of mind

We knew that we could never return home
We could never be accepted back
For all of the things that we went through
Just threw our lives off track

We fought for our rights and freedom
We inspired each other with our hearts
We made a vow to always be together
And that nothing would ever keep us apart

We were banished by our families
And when I found this to be true
It was then that my heart rejoiced
I could finally do what I wanted to do

I went over to her and asked her
To spend the rest of her life with me
I got down on one knee
And I asked her to marry me

She happily obliged and I knew
That my life would never be the same
We could finally settle down together
And all of our happiness would forever remain

We planned our wedding for the very next year
We picked out my tuxedo and her dress
We wanted everything to be perfect
For our past lives were always a mess

We spent every day together
Walking side by side
We would smile and laugh together
And kiss away the tears that we cried

She was the kind of girl you could never yell at
She was so sweet and full of life
I just couldn't wait to walk down the aisle with her
I couldn't wait for us to be husband and wife

Then one day I got a call from a friend
And as I listened to him I began to cry
The woman that I loved had been killed in an accident
And all I could do was cry out "WHY?"

My heart broke into pieces
My whole world just fell apart
I knew that I could never move on
Without her next to my heart

I cry each and every day
Hoping to hear her voice and feel her touch
There's no escaping this madness inside
I just miss her so very much

She still lives in my heart
She lives on in my dreams
Her voice still echoes throughout my mind
Always cutting me at the seams

She'll always be my greatest friend
Even though I know we're worlds apart
I don't know if I'll ever get over her
She's still there like she was from the start

She's with me in my darkest hours
I see her when I sleep
She'll always be my guardian angel
Her memory I will always keep

Until the day that we reunite
In Heaven she will always be
Looking out for me wherever I am
Inspiring and guiding me

Sometimes I wish that it were me and not her
I wish that I could somehow be with her tonight
I wish that she would come and hold me
And tell me that everything will be all right

No matter where I am each day
No matter what I do or say
I'll never get over losing her
I wish that it had never ended that way









 

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Option Four: Young Love

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  • Roxy Rae Mae
    November 30
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    A beautiful read and great emotions. You write so well

    Good Luck and thank you for entering my contest

  • Good Luck!

    What a beautiful write! Thank you for entering!

    ~Tabitha


  • teenagefailure
    November 11, 2007
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    WOAH!!! SADD!!!!!!! I can feel the emotions, their are so many emotions, you can feel the love from this!!! My favorite part is She was so sweet and full of life
    I just couldn't wait to walk down the aisle with her
    I couldn't wait for us to be husband and wife


    Great job!!!
    Good luck in my contest!!

    -Erin Lyn


  • Beautyfull-x-Angel
    September 17, 2007
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    this is an amazing peice thanx so much for entering it and sharing it with me good luck


  • Aurielle
    August 11, 2007

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    this was long...but really good. i think somewhere the flow miessed up as you can see due the longer lines being shown clear. i think it was in the second stanza or the third...but anqays that is so sad that the one love you find she passed your way. Its so sad as you can see the world is full of sadness. Just remember all the lovely things. BEing with her again in your memories...At least the memories of her isn't gone so you can know their is happiness in this world... Sweet poem


  • silencethequestion
    June 27, 2007

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    This is beautifully written and i absoulotly loved it great write. i deffinitly had tears in my eyes. keep it up and good luck in my contest


  • th3sl4y3r
    May 21, 2007

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    this is so beautiful and so very sad, I have tears in my eyes.... The imagery is very strong of the love these two hold for each other... the emotions of loosing someone you love so deeply are very strong, the pain is powerfully written in this poem... this entire story of love and loosing love is wonderfuly written.. well done!!!
    thank you for entering my contest and good luck..
    peace and light always..


  • PerfectImperfection
    May 19, 2007

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    Very descriptive piece in the beginning, but loosing force as it went on to tell about the 'accident'. Deeply woven emotion; sadness woven in each line. Thank you for your entry!

  • There was just sooooo sooooo much emotion in this tears,joy,happiness,and hurt...a love like that is not found everyday for sure and it really does suck that he had to lose her like that...it's very tragic...you know a love like this is really hard to believe in but it is out there and if you are lucky enough to experience it then you were/are blessed...what a beautiful write,the flow ws great,and I really feel the rhyming scheme was flawless great job!!


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 17, 2007
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    great job! I can see why you would consider this an extremely well written poem! It was soooooooo good! I really enjoy poems about Love!!! I also Loved the background you chose and the nice font! there really good! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest and the others your in!!!!




    -Steve-


  • cardiphonia
    April 6, 2007
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    thank you for entering!

    whew long! but nice romantic feel in general...i liked the story you built. well done.

  • kimmipoo
    April 4, 2007
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    Very good poem!!!!

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