Hey Daddy...
Do you remember me?
Your daughter?
I didn稚 mean for this to happen.
I知 really sorry...
I was in my bedroom the whole time
you were looking for me.
I致e been thinking about this a lot.
I know you miss the old me,
I知 sorry I知 not who you thought I was...
The only daughter that you remember
is the perfect one.
The girl who loves school,
The one who tells Daddy everything.
I知 sorry I never told you she left...
I know I知 different now.
I知 cold, hard, and bleak
I thought you wanted me to change.
Daddy, please tell me you still love me.
I知 sorry for becoming this...
I miss the old me too, Daddy.
I miss smiling when I looked out the window
Forgeting love was something I
never meant to do.
I知 sorry that I never said goodbye...
I know that I made you mad.
I really didn稚 intend to.
Anger, or so I thought,
Is only temporary.
I知 sorry I can稚 control myself.
And Daddy,
I知 sorry for the scars on my arms,
I知 sorry for those crying fits.
I知 sorry I blamed them all on you,
And I知 sorry that I never realized that
this isn稚 your fault.
Its mine.
Author notes
Option #6:: I'm sorry
In a list
A contest entry
- Dark and Depressing #2 by XHollowXEyesX.
750 points, ended June 18, 2007, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this is truly a deep emotional write. Your words are so powerful and touching. I can really feel the intensity of your feelings, ans it is as if you are screaming these words out trying to be understood.
beautifull write.
Keep your head up.
thanks for entering and goodlcuk -
this is a really dark poem but i..understand what you are trying to say... keep writing its good
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.wow.
thats deep -
amazing darling.
sarah none of this is your fault. dont ever think that. this is such a great poem and i can tell you put a lot of thought into it. and that it means al ot to you. good job darling
I LOVE YOU
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this is so sad and sounds like a cry for help. one thing that strikes me is that though you are the one inflicting the scars, i don't think blaming you is good. i think there is something underneath all of this that if figured out can be the answer. i am not a doctor but that is just what i have noticed throughout life. thank you for sharing your heart with me today. viyanna rosemarie
smile you are worth it.
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this is a really good poem :]
I like it
Mmhmm.
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sarah its not all your fault...aww thsi is such a good poem...it was so emotional an so personal to you...it was ecellent. i love how you could really tell it was "hand writen"
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