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Honky Tonk Badonkadonk

She walked tall into the door
And the minute she hit the floor
They played her song and she
Danced with everyone proudly

She was the show of the town
And made those around her happy
Even those with problems had
To smile when she was around

Then one day, an out of towner
Came by and made some fun, she
Just looked at the bartender
And said, "Play it baby."

She strutted her stuff and all
The men flocked to the floor
But she teased and taunted that
Poor guy until he couldn't speak

He tried so hard to apologize
But she just smiled and said
"You can forget about it boy
And kiss my badonkadonk."

Author notes

yeah.. enough said, it was a dare. go figure.

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  • Welcome-To-Hell
    March 29, 2007

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    This is hilarious I'm not sure if that was the intent but its extremely funny well written best of luck to you in the contest


  • Crazy-Baby
    March 28, 2007

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    lol, love it! well done, it had me smiling. i love the attitude, its really well written, good luck in the contest n keep writing x x x