The streets
The cars
is black and white
We are cruel
We are mean
But the world said nothing
While we trashed it
We are making the world
a sad, sad place
The animals
The ocean
they are dying from our trash
We give nothing to them
they say nothing
but they are sad
Think about the animals
Think about what we're doing tot them
We are killing them
We take their food
We make their lives misreable
This world
is dying
of pain
and lack of things
We need to give
The world did a lot
God gave us life
God gave us life to make the world a happy place
for a kind
But what we done
Is none of the sort
All we did
was trash it
We need to stop
Pick up the trash
Don't eat the animals food
give them something
Be helpful
and your life we be a happy life
We need to do better
For this world
Is dying
We done nothing
Soon, we will die
Because of the things we did
So give a little love to the world
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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you seem to go stright for the neck with you poems, i like this about them, you did a great job, keep it flowing
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hi! im pretty new to his whole poetry thing so im sorry for blabbing on a bit if i do, or not writting anything perticularly relevant if i dont...
nice poem, i quite like it! i like the way it flows well, i like your choice of words too, and i understand what you are talking about too (im a little slow at the moment as i have a cold...)
I cant really think of anything else to say...sorry.
erm, if you can give me any tips on what to write when commenting on poems i would be very gratefull indeed and if you have any tips on where to get inspiration or what sort of thing to write about in my own poem i would also really apritiate it as, if you can see (i dont know how to work this website yet) i havent written anything yet...i dont really know what to write about...
anyway, thanks for reading this!
zas51zas
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Nice job i loved it!i agree with alot of things in this poem
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