I would give up the grace
I hold in my words
To see the amazing grace
Of your gentle dance.
I'm sure you make love to
The melody, for such sweetness
Can only be found by
A woman in love.
The most perfect girl
Must make the most
Perfect dancer
I would lay down my voice
Silence it forever
To see you fly through the air
Light as a feather.
Your touch to the floor
Would be so gentle
Like that of a lover
Meeting again and again.
The most perfect girl
Must make the most
Perfect dancer
A contest entry
- Hopelessy Romantic Guys by Ice queen 17.
300 points, ended April 5, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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VERY SWEET READ
IT HAS A GOOD FLOW AND RHYTHM TO IT
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This Has...
...a clean kind of passion, while still having a sensuality. It has a sense of a child-like wonder for someone else. To me, child-likeness is actually emotional maturity.
It is very musical, lyrical. I'm very much impressed with this. You're very talented.
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate the compliments.
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A compliment easy to give because of what I read. I was simply being honest and genuine.
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