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Heartbeat

                              We see love,
                          we know it's beatuiful                           
                  but will we ever get the chance of love?
                                Some have,
                            Some can't find it.
                          But what's the point?
                        Some say love stinks,
                              it maybe true
                      But love is all we have
                      Our hearts, are giving in
                            Dont stop now
                            You may find it
                              some day soon.
                    The heartbeat goes though our veins
                      Listen to the ones you know
                      The ones you love
                      Because there's nothing
                      To stop love, from getting to you
                      For our heartbeat
                      will change in a second.
                      Say you love them
                      But only say itif you mean it
                      Because you will be brought down
                              Heartbeat
                        The love will come to you
                        Stop asking for it
                    If you love him, of her then tell them
                    They may love you back.
                                Because
            love is the most beatuiful thing in the world
                                  dont give up
                        you will find it.
                      Let it see you through

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 28, 2007

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    oh i love this poem i mean that, i mean you did a great no a wonderful job on this, keep it flowing and just know this is golden