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The Dark Knight {Batman}

with a silent
              s w i s h
he is gone

he lives in personal hell

he'll N E V E R
give in now

he can hear the Joker
L
A
U
G
H
I
N
G
in his ears at night

even if Joker is behind the Assylem gates

Poison Ivy twists through his mind by night
Dr. Freeze torments him
during the day
a day full of ice and fear

Catwoman
          foe??
or friend??
          he'll never know

he uses his wits
                  his technology
to stay alive
                to stay on top

he must do his duty
as a hero
a protector
a dark knight

          he must avenge

he is the Batman

Author notes

i'm not sure if i like this poem...but i love Batman.

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  • Perplexed in Love
    March 29, 2007

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    lol so this the poem you were talking about? its nice. ok im not juz saying this coz ur my friend. i mean its really nice and kinda humorous..

    keep it up juls.. luv u rosaline!!! LMAO &


  • infernalxfidelity
    March 29, 2007

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    oops...i didn't mean to put a comment on my own poem...i hit the wrong button...sorry.


  • lemon meringue pie
    March 29, 2007

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    nice, the first batman poem i really enjoyed this pice, the structure is nice i particularly like stanza one.

    • infernalxfidelity
      March 29, 2007
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      thanks! i'm glad you liked it! i adore Batman. he's my all time favorite super-hero...closly fallowed by the X-men!