The cold takes my breath away
Holding you never felt the same
Avalanche or not
You will always be with me
Quiet frozen emotion
Stranded with only the warmth of love
Avalanche or not
You will always be with me
Shivering brings me back to life
If only for a second
As your love runs deep within my veins
Avalanche or not
You will always be with me
A contest entry
- Choices by Beating.
450 points, ended March 30, 2007, 31 entries
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Avalanche or not, thank you for entering. whisper
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beautiful!
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hello
thank you all for the high reviews of this poem -
OUTSTANDING
The title was appealing so i decided to have a look, this poem is excellent, very well done, you must be proud. especially when you kept sayin 'avalanche or not' . Okay no, good no, very good no, OUTSTANDING!!
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Excellent
WOW This is a Excellent piece of writting!
I love every single line in this poem. so
very beautiful. Well done my dear poet!
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