Do you hear my whispers
calling to you in the night?
The reflection of my fear
shadowing the break of morning
facing another day without you
I submerge myself in my longings
to bring you close
Are you as lost as I am
Working your way through
the mist of confusion,
searching for answers
I feel you, always
Your soul sending messages
of new beginnings
My soul responding
with an absolute “Yes”
Feel me, always
In your soul
In your heart
In my whispers
Author notes
Hear my whispers......
In a list
A contest entry
- softly does it by honey bear.
600 points, ended July 27, 2007, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this exelent write that has deep passion and emotion surging through it
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Are you as lost as I am
Working your way through
the mist of confusion,
searching for answers
I feel you, always
Your soul sending messages
of new beginnings
My soul responding
with an absolute “Yes”
with these two stanzas i would think you live in my head as this is so something i could have written. thank you for sharing the write's beauty with me. viyanna rosemarie
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In this you can feel the heat and hear the beat great write here how often have we all whished they could hear all our whispers
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Erotic and Mystery
Soulful woman is so very in tune, so erotic, so very soulful...........
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Noreen, this is so beautiful, thank-you for sharing words can never describe the effect these words have had on me
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Awwwww, so sweet
Could feel the emotions and feelings flowing this write, touching places not seen. This gets into your heart and find a place to loiter and wait. nicely done.
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Well thank goodness! You wrote a poem to me! My answer to each question is “yes”. I hear your whispers all day long. Seriously this is another well written piece; may your pen never run out of ink.
Love,
Amera
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this is a very very beautiful poem..it has a magical aura and i love that...very very talented lady you are and you write such amazing poems keep it up i love your poems well doen love xx
laura xxxx -
Beautiful.......
This is an awesome pen .I loved it
and very much felt the emotions.
I know very well these feelings you speak of.
I feel you, always
Your soul sending messages
of new beginnings
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful write
Gloria
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Nice, whispers that mean so much to the one you long for. I liked the form and style of this, lovely penning. Love, C
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Very good
Beautiful write. Like the poem. -
this starts out so sad. without your loved one. you can really sense the longing in this poem.
i wonder if this is about a lost love...or someone you are longing to meet, but havent yet.
very strong emotions in this piece. nice job.
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Beautiful. I really don't have anything more to say about this.
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Deep from the soul this one sings...a longing, sweet melody! What wonderful new beginnings are...fresh, new whispers resonating in your heart & soul....Awesome write my woman!
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Beautiful write. Good flow and full of passionate emotions. Thank you for sharing.
Always pen from the heart and you shall never write wrong.
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A nice sensual, hopeful write. Thanks for sharing.
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Full of emotions love and need. Well done, this is a great write.
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