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Build Me a Barricade

Give me a limit and I’ll break it quickly
Build me a barricade and I’ll tear it down
Come wrestle my dreams, I dare you.
My dreams will win, every time

Give me a challenge and say I can’t do it
Give me a task that I cannot complete
Build your doubts from iron, steel or titanium
I won’t matter
I will break them with my will

I am a hoper, a screamer, a late night dreamer
I can move mountains
I can fight the impossible
I can be faster than a speeding bullet
More powerful than a locomotive
And I can leap your disbelief in a single bound

So go, build me a barricade,
it won’t stay up for long.

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This one was for English class

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  • CryingStars
    January 3, 2008

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    Another great one! you have a lot of talent... but im sure you dont need me to tell youthat.
    Kepp up the good work
    -NessaJO


  • azwiggz
    March 28, 2007

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    wow

    this was reallly good. i can relate to it a lot. it's really angsty, something i didn't expect out of you. it was good though, one of my favorites from you. nice jobb.


    • Red Death
      March 28, 2007
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      Thanks. Angsty huh? That wasn't really my intention but it's open to interpretation.