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As I leave...



With a smile I leave
With relief in my heart
I throw away all I believe
As I know it wasn't smart...

I've been hurt SO much!
I've been decieved so many times
And I want to break the cycle
Even if it takes commiting a crime

And before I leave
I want to say goodbye
To all my family
To all who'll ask why

I want to farewell...
Everyone who ever cared
Anyone who even had some pitty
Someone who had been fair...

I say good bye to the ones I love!
I say goodbye as I leave this life...

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  • LifeEndsNow
    March 29, 2007

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    wow this was very good, i really liked this poem
    you have done just a wonderful job, good luck to you -Kevin