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Dawn

The gentle touch
Of a morning breeze
The songs of birds
Resting in emerald trees.

Overcome by the silence
Helpless to it’s call
Enfolded by the serenity
And it’s approaching fall.

Whirlwind of emotions
Followed by the heart
Dawn’s true innocence
Guards the day from the start.

©PoeticWindstorms2007

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  • HighlandsGirl
    April 30, 2008

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    Lovely, soft images to begin the day. Well written and rhymed and pleasurable to read. Well done! ~Elizabeth


  • tawk gold member
    April 30, 2008
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    I love to watch a new day dawining, it's like I have a second chance at everything in life again. Wow what an amazing poem. Beautiful imagery I felt I was there with you watching it unfold! Keep up the beautiful and amazing writing my friend. Thanks for you wonderful comments on my poems! Have a blessed and wonderful day Theresa